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Very, very true!!! Spoken from the heart. A nice and

realistic portrayal of how a man would tell a women he's loved for many years

would tell her how he feels.

Thanks

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(NAME) Michael

(LOCATION) Missouri

I liked it quite a bit, which I'm sure you've guessed by now.

The amazing thing to me is its origionality. I've been in

thatre since I was six years old and never havce I

encountered a play that allowed the guy to be emotionlly

reveiling without making the girl into some kind of hag.

Add to that a truthful plot, hilarious antics, and defined

characters and you have a great play. Which you do. My

only problem with the play was the ending. It plays on

human emotions and is honest which makes it hard. I agree

with the ending, but as an audience member it hurts too

much. You obviously have a lot of talent and as a writer

myuself, I'm a little jealous, but hey, that's the way it

goes. . .

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(NAME) Billie

(LOCATION) New Zealand

This play is fab! It is extremely funny for me because the dialogue is very natural and true to life. The characters are realistic and easily imagined. The ending, though disappointing, is strong. But I feel that the character of "He" would not have taken that action. But yeah, that is just my opinion.

I love your writing style and would love to read more of your work

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(NAME) Raven

(LOCATION) Oklahoma

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Very good. Just the monologue without the afterword, or true story are soooo sad and "disturbing" And really very good. Great competition piece. It is also very ironic, if you know the whole storry... but just as effective. Thanks.

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(NAME) frank

(LOCATION) gainesville

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great! really enjoyed reading it

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(NAME) mary

(LOCATION) not where i am...

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This is really cool, i would use it if i didn't think i would get in a lot of trouble for it.

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(NAME) Jeffrey

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Hi, you've got a great page and even greater monologues. I especially like

the Male monologue from "Tangled Up In Blue". I want to perform it and put

it on my reel. Is this cool? Thanks.

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(NAME) Christina

(LOCATION) oklahoma

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I like it, I love it, I want some of it. You have a great imagination. Keep going!!!

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(NAME) Kate

(LOCATION) Lexington Kentucky

(why_here) Need monologue for class

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(comments) I liked it- it leaves a lot of room for interpretation for the actress (as a monologue, I haven't read the play) I like the disturbed monologue for the women better, but they're very different. The disturbed monologue is enthralling.

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(NAME) Cristiana

(LOCATION) Princeton, NJ

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I loved it. It was great!!!! Any humorous stuff?

The monolugue for my audition needs to be a

humorous piece, but I'm going to save this for future use.

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(NAME) SprkliOne

(LOCATION) Iowa

(why_here) Need monologue for class

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(comments) That was DEFINITELY "Disturbed" all right!! Kind of funny, though. Not funny funny, but weird funny.

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(NAME) Christine

(LOCATION) Midlothian, VA

(why_here) Need monologue for competition

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I really love this monologue. I used it a few months

ago for an audition and I think I really surprised

my friends. (Nobody thought I could be serious) Now

I'd like to use it for a forensics competition. Is

that okay?

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(NAME) Lauren

(LOCATION) San Jose, CA

(why_here) Need monologue for audition

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I really enjoyed it. I needed something small, yet

passionate.

This is perfect. Thank You!

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(NAME) KRISTIN

(LOCATION) DAYTONA BEACH, FLORIDA

(why_here) Need monologue for audition

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(comments) I LIKEDE THIS MONOLOGUE VERY MUCH. AT FIRST I REALLY DIDN'T UNDERSTAND WHAT IT WAS ALL ABOUT TOWARDS THE END, BUT MY FRIEND EXPLAINED IT TO ME. I LIKES IT SO MUCH THAT I AUDITIONED WITH IT AT LAST YEAR'S STATE THESPIAN CONFERENCE.I EVEN GOT A COUPLE CALLBACKS FROM A FEW COLLEGES.I WILL ONCE AGAIN USE THIS MONOLOGUE THIS YEAR FOR DISTRICT AND STATE CONFERENCE.IT IS AN EXCELLENT PLAY AND TERRIFIC MONOLOGUE. CONGRATULATIONS ON WRITING SOMETHING SO BRILLIANT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

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(NAME) Sara

(LOCATION) Alton, Il

(why_here) Need monologue for audition

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I like it a lot...I hope I am not infringing on any

copy write stuff if I use it for this stupid audition.

(I feel that all auditions are stupid....and I just

found out how soon this one is...under a lot of

pressure.)

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(NAME) Heather

(LOCATION) Los Angeles CA

(why_here) Need monologue for class

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I really enjoyed your female monologue from Disturbed, unfortunatly, i need a minute long monologue...so i chose the female monologue from Tangled up in blue...they were so great.

thanks a bundle!!

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(NAME) Porter

(LOCATION) Georgia

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(comments) Disturbed was great!

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(NAME) kristi

(LOCATION) tennessee

(why_here) Need monologue for audition

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(comments) that is so awesome! you're a great writer, and this just freaks me out. i'm going to print it and consider it for my governor's school for the theatre audition.

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(NAME) Amanda

(LOCATION) Oklahoma city

(why_here) Need monologue for competition

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(comments) It was wonderful!! I am getting some ideas for some monologues to do for competition soon, and I thought yours was one of the best I have read. Keep up the good work!

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(NAME) Julianne

(LOCATION) Bayville, NJ

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(comments) I liked it! depressing, but good! i was looking for monologues for an audition and happened upon your page. i'd like to use it but i don't know what the story is on your "rights" policy. if you wouldn't mind me using it, could you write me back with an OK? Thanks so much!

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(NAME) Jeff

(LOCATION) Tremonton, Utah

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Brilliant!!!

I'm a novice writer myself and DANG would I like to

write likle that!

The feeling was in the words.

Beautiful.

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(NAME) Julie

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I just read the monlogue from" Disturbed" and I loved it!!!! It was

incredible! I was loking for a monlogue to use for an upcoming audition

for "See How They Run", and that may the monlogue for me..My connection

got broken and I was so worried I would never find the monlouge again,

it's awesome!!!! Great job!

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